Term 3 W3

Week 3

A Whale Tale
What's a whale doing in the middle of our town? Pretend you are the local reporter and you have to write an article to tell what is happening. You may choose one of the following news headlines to help you get started. Use your imagination!!

  • Whale Invades Revell Street, Takes Over the Council
  • New School Is Shaped Like a Whale
  • Whale Gets Lost in Hokitika

MAKE SURE YOU CHECK YOUR WORK FOR THE FOLLOWING:
  1. Does it make sense?
  2. Have you used interesting words?
  3. Is the punctuation correct?
  4. Are any words spelled incorrectly?

5 comments:

  1. Maia7 August 2016 at 22:24

    New School Is Shaped Like A Whale
    The school St Patrick that just opened, being shaped like a whale, most of the students didn't think it was a school. It's not very big so the school can afford good equipment.Some people think think this whale is cluttering up the town what do you think? Go to www.educationnz.co.nz and tell us what you think, education or beauty.

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  2. Pat8 August 2016 at 00:42

    Whale Gets Lost in Hokitika
    Patrick van Beek was surf casting at the tip head when all of a sudden he hooked a whale. The whale flew over his shoulder when he was pulling it in and it landed in Hokitika. Patrick went into town to find the whale but couldn't find it anywhere, it was lost. Someone came screaming past Patrick shouting, "There is a whale at the I-site looking for directions"

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  3. OLLIE8 August 2016 at 21:26

    Ollie get squashed bye pats whale
    One day Ollie Nixon was out walking his dog around town then suddenly a whale comes out of nowere and landed on Ollie.
    Ollie is in hospital in a critical condition but expected to pull through.

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    1. Mrs Gwaliasi9 August 2016 at 19:06

      Very clever work, making your story link to the previous one. I'm impressed!!

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  4. isla9 August 2016 at 19:45

    breaking news giant whale roaming around the town after a tsunami in Auckland many people have been dead first killed was Ollie Nixon screaming for help and is in hospital anyway who knows what it will do next I am at the seen know oh my gosh it is huge oh no run for your lives thanks for tuning in [camera breaks crrrrr pow boom

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