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  1. Maia
    One day I was walking through the bush near my house and I heard a rustle in the bushes near me, at first I was scared but then I saw a fluffy tail come out. I walked over and peered through the bushes and guess what I found? A chinchilla! It was so cute that I had to take it home, so I picked it up and skipped home. When I got there, my brothers were so jealous that they went searching for their own one but instead came back with an absurd looking crow, which they put in a cage next to my chinchilla. A little later, while we were having dinner we all heard a crash and went to see what had happened. The living room was a mess and the crow was out! That’s what happens when you invite something wild into your home.

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  2. One day I was playing touch with my friends at my house. But the I heard a mysterious noise I was freaking out. I slowly tip toed and had a little peek it was an egg cracking it was blue and had black dots. I carefully picked it up and took it inside and showed mum and dad. They looked at each other and said we will make a nest and keep it inside. So we did but a few minutes later it was cracking even more and then something uninspected came out it was a chicken crossed with an bird. It was the weirdest thing I have ever seen then we went to bed. The next morning we woke up and there was eggs everywhere! That's what happens when you invite something wild into your home.

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  3. One day I went pig hunting and I saw a really cute bunny. I didn'twant to shoot it' so I caught it and bought it home. I went to get some food for it and while i was gone it laid Jellybeans all over the table. When I returned I put it outside then picked up all the Jellybeans and put them in a jar. When I went back outside it had laid chocolate eggs all over the lawn. After that I put the bunny back in the forest and then went back to pick up the chocolate eggs. That what happens when you invite something wild into your home. At least I'm ready for Easter.

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  4. One day I was outside in my yard and I heard a loud knock on the door. I went to the door and opened it. All I could see was pink scaly skin and a bit of the (what looks like) the head, with short arms. The thing said "Can I PLEASE use the toilet?"
    "Fine. If you can fit through the door. "The thing tried to fit through the door. SAMSH. BANG. That's what happens when you invite something wild into your home.

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