100WC T4 W2

WOW I was really impressed by last weeks stories, let's see if you can do it again...






Watch the video and rewrite it as a story. Remember to describe the characters the wee bird meets.

7 comments:

  1. Maia
    The little bird cannot whistle, instead it makes a high pitched wailing sound. All the other animals and people can whistle, even a ferocious tiger! A traffic officer has a whistle and the bird steals it, he blows it and all the traffic gets out of control, (If you ask me people shouldn’t rely on a whistle to keep traffic orderly,) the bird drops the whistle and the traffic officer tells him to be quiet. After being told to be quiet the bird was mad, so he jumped up in the air and whistled so loudly that somehow, it sounded nice and now the bird can whistle.

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  2. A bird named Billy couldn't whistle allthough all of the other birds and animals could, he could only make high pitch noises. He passes by a traffic oficer which had a whistle, billy steals it when the oficer wasn't paying attention. He then goes by whistling and all the traffic gets crazy!! he drops the whistle and the traffic oficer tells him to be quit. He gets sad and also mad that he flies up in the air and whistles loudly and strangely it sounds nice and now billy can whistle.

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  3. One day a bird couldn't whistle as good as any other bird,human or animal.The only noise the little birdie could make was a horrible high pitched whistle.So the little bird took the whistle out of the traffic officers clothing,and blew the whistle and everything was out of hand.But then the orange fluffy bird dropped the whistle and the officer piked the whistle up and told the bird to be quiet.After he said that the bird was so sad he went flying and tried to whistle.He was so surprised of how beautiful his whistle was.And he lived happily ever after with his beautiful tone in his whistle. THE END

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  4. BRAD :) :) :) :) :) :)19 October 2016 at 20:28

    One day a little bird could not whistle as good as everyone else it just sounded like Justin bieber. Then he seen the traffic man talking and the bird stole the whistle and blew and made the traffic all in a mess. So the bird dropped the whistle and the traffic man caught it and the traffic wasn't a bunch then the traffic man told the bird to zip his word hole. The bird got really mad and did a big high jump higher then us and whistled as loud as he could and it started to sound better and better. People actually liked the bird and now the bird is happy with his lovely tuned whistle. THE END :)

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  5. Hey i started school in katikati (kkps) there is 25 classrooms and over 500 kids, I am in room 19-18 (the two class rooms are combined into a pod. (Turangawaewae)) i will name some of my friends, Justis, David, DC (Daniel), Anyton, Puel, Donavan, Levi, and Pete. I hope you are all well. Bye

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  6. Great to hear from you Jack. Boy your new school sounds HUGE. I bet it is a little scary after little old Saint Mary's. I'm pleased that you have made so many new friends, that's one of the good things about being at a bigger school eh!!

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